Dependent Origination

Night Circus

Posted on: May 6, 2013

night_circus

这本也是去年看了个开头儿 就时间到了只能还掉 心里一直惦记着 现在有了kindle 自然马上开始借:)哎 前半本儿和后半本儿根本两个水平 前面开篇啊 介绍人物啊 时代背景啊 魔法马戏团啊 仿佛让你觉得这跟harry potter是一个级别的:它要带你进入到魔法世界 讲一个玄幻的爱情故事。从一半儿的地方 就什么都变了 爱情?爱情在哪里?怎么产生的?没看出来 其实就是两个人特别孤独 然后网聊了一下 就爱得难舍难分了 请问这谁相信啊? 魔幻呢 最后我都没太看懂他们是怎么折腾自己的 我觉得从作者到编辑都需要重新补一些物理或者基础科学的课程 这样别人才能看得懂你这个大戏剧高潮是怎么回事儿

后一半还充满了不知所以的人物 看不出来和情节发展的联系 好像就是为了在戏剧高潮的时候出现在这里 所以必须有这么一条线 总之写作技巧不够得很 可惜了开篇的potential and promise

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